I absolutely adored this, seeing how much I despise girls/women/females who can't help themselves. Wonderful job!

Omg. It works. It all makes sense. O.O It actually seems completely ORGANIZED...
Wow. Thought I liked only your haphazard style; seems I was wrong! XD
Love the last stanza! As you would say, "Squee!"
~ Kit ~

I lke hte new word that you inventier. Who knows? Maybe one day it will end up in a dictionary. All words were at one time non-existant. Well. I liked it. I found it amusing...and it is true, guys are soemtimes like that, especially in current times.

I loved this one! ^^ I'm such a feminist.
-Cindy Moon *)

Wow. I love this piece. Its sarcasm is so fierce!
"Clearly I ask too much" is my favorite part. It's the perfect ending because it's so final. So.. done.
Amazing work. Keep it up.
Postscript: Thank you for the review.

hehe... I like! Damsel-in-distress poems entertain me, for I think I fit into that category. (until a prince tries to save me, then I hit him and run off... I made a bad habit out of that X-x) But nice job. I enjoyed it. :)
Tokiko

HA! I love it! Fie on Prince Charming, he's never sincere. Beautiful.

I like this. Go being annoyed by the typical damsel in the distress! (I really need a single word for that) I love the tone it's written in. Mandatory criticism: "hold me tight/wanting.../what, a doll?" why a doll?? otherwise, good.
~Kiara

lol, it's funny when you write about it, but it's funnier when u know someone like that.

It's been a while since I logged on. Nice poem. Reminds me of my cousin.