wow this one hits close to home for me actually. very close to home. especially the first two paragraphs, "so i guess I'll just fake that all is ok to me and everything is just perfect and happy" and "you took my heard again and again but i don't know if i want more than friends." it rings true in a situation i'm in, good job on this one!

wow this is so awsome it explains exactly how i feel also...trapped and waiting for peace...wicked good

this hit the spot...

powerful. I love it.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

I really liked this poem, it says the words i need to hear, the way I felt. Keep it up, k?