m isn't it just...

lovely

Awesome piece!

beautiful piece, and a nice metaphorical description of love. i like the imagery, especially the last line. nice job.

This is beautiful. And ever so accurate! This is just what being in love feels like. Anyway, what I feel like when I'm in love. Amazing.

Lovely. This really captures the essence of falling in love. ;-)

Jop, das trifft's wirklich sehr gut! Super Haiku!
Werd mich mal wieder aufraffen und öfters hier vorbei schauen! ;D
Immer weiterschreiben, Stoffi!
cio, hoellenwauwau

Sweet...

perfect description.. Ü
i especially loved the ending, and the irony.. falling, accompanied by something so perfect.. i'm feeling melancholy now.. wehehe.. amazing work! keep it up! ^_^

Thats sweet. the velvet is so complimentary to the idea. Awesome!

Awesome. Just awesome- You explained it in a very unique, extraordinary way. Brilliant job!
~Lidless Eye

I LOVE THIS HAIKU! I was wondering if I could use it for my website, I'd really appreciate it. Please e-mail me at ferrari_faerie@sbcglobal.net with a reply. ^^

This image really does match love. Keep on writing.

Your line should be complete thoughts not run ons, but other than that its got a nice picture, very peacfull!

Oh, wow. Lovely imagery. The last line was beautiful; probably because it completes the image wonderfully.
Ah, a feather floating down in the backdrop of the sky while the sun sets. Beautiful.

Hi Kerstin!
ich finds Haiku sehr shön. hab dich übrigens zu meiner Favourite`s Athors -List hinzugefügt. Habe neue Sachen gepostet;-)
Also viele liebe Grüße, Sil