I liked this! The whole part about it happening right before the war made me think of a scene in Gone With The Wind! loL! I could see the man almost as Rhett Butler! hahah! Well anywayz- great job! You should write more poetry! If you arn't too busy, please read and review my work entitled The Violin! Thanks in advance! Keep up the excellent work!

that is a really nice poem! the repitition of tomorrow worked well. great job! keep writing!

Oh wow...very...very nice...so...deep and emotional...I like it...