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| suzieque2 2005-02-15 ch 1,   | It almost reminds me of my kids til that last line... my boy would just assume give his sister a shove instead... :-I |
| Slightly Bent Halo 2004-07-17 ch 1, | aw, it's nice to read a sweet poem about a brother and sister getting along... there's too much negativity in the world (and on this site), people need to learn to be more positive! |
| Seeker of the Way 2004-06-05 ch 1, | hey, lime-girl jsut showed this to me! This is really good here. It paints a nice scene/moment with a great emotional resonence. Nice rhyme and structure, too! Bravo! |
| katmonkey 2004-05-15 ch 1, | This is so sweet. My brother and I don't always get on together but when we do it's great. Awesome poem - it's going on my favorites! *lime-girl* |
| Hermefonia 2004-01-26 ch 1, | That is so cool.. I'm sorry but in my opinion it reminds me of Harry Potter and Hermione Granger...:D |
| Birdaloo 2004-01-19 ch 1, | aw! this is REALLY cute! it makes me miss my brother SO much! keep writing! i miss your stories! BRING THEM ON!:D smooch! ~Birdy |
| Mime 2004-01-17 ch 1, | The last line is sweet. I wish my bro and I got along better. ^_^ |
| SpawnMeister666 2004-01-17 ch 1, | Okay, so it's corny. But childhood is kind of corny anyway, when you sit back and look at how innocently they play certain games with each other, when in later life they'll argue over just about everything. So, corny maybe. But a damn fine piece of work none the less! Spawny P.S. Are you still mad at me hon? |