I was wondering if I could post this poem on my website. I'd put your name and stuff like that. I really like it. So, Can I?

Interesting flow to it. It seems different than the other stuff you've written. And dammit this is the last thing I can review today, I'll have to read more of your stuff tomorrow, unless I die and unexplainable death before then.

nicely written.

awesome poem, i have felt that way so many times, and been in that situation so many times, keep up the good work...

Sucide? Love? Sounds good to me, I believe it's one of the few perfect combos for good poetry. Bai bai ja ne 0.o Darkness

very well done i would pat you on the head or something but you are on the other side of the country so this will have to do...forgive the weird mood i am in...i would love to write this kind of stuff for my ** community theater class but no its too serious and dangerous...we musnt talk as if there is no way to recover...

wow this is deep..nice job..really..it is good..but it makes me sad..who is this about exactly??...good job!

OMG. This is deep, and so sad. The repetition makes it powerful. I can't identify and hope I never will, but it still touches my heart because I have a couple of friends who deal with suicide. There's so much pain here. It's a good poem, like a letter to a loved one. ~Chloe

Your poems are so great! They are definetly what I've been looking to read!