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XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-17 ch 28,	abuseThat was really cool, the way you went through a year in their lives. I really liked this story and I might read it again sometime. But for now I'm going to the Authors Note and then I have to work on my on darn story lol. Anyways, great job and I'm out!
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-17 ch 26,	abuseChapter Twenty-Five(It was really cool the way he asked her to the dance. Guys are so dominant that way. They like to ask the girl out and they like to ask for their hand in marriage and they just like things like that. So we women humor them lol. Loved it) Chapter Twenty-Six(Sadly I couldn't up with a name for this chapter either. But I loved it none the less. Most white guys can't dance lol. It's a sterotype but now a lot of white guys are shaking their groove thangs right along with the rest of us. It's awesome! Bye For Now!
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-17 ch 23,	abuseWOW that chapter was really, really cool. And I really love the chapter name. It was great and I think they can make it. They're so worth it to each other so...yeah. Awesome.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-17 ch 22,	abuseOhkay, that was a bit weird. Why did she just leave? I thought she was more rational than that.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-17 ch 21,	abuseFINALLY! It took them long enough to kiss. I had to read twenty-one chapters for this to happen lol. But it was worth it. Nicely done. Bye!
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-17 ch 20,	abuseWow, the chapters got short again O_o what's that all about lol. Anyways, I liked the last two chapters. Though I'm not so sure about how I feel about Brian being well...unable. Anyways though, I'm off. Bye!
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-17 ch 18,	abuseChapter seventeen was pretty cool but umm is it like she doesn't believe in love or something? I don't know, I hardly read romance novels but I believe in all that stuff that romantic novelists write about. This day and age it's really rare but I still believe it's out there. So chapter eighteen was cool but Brian's thoughts kind of jump around a bit and things just aren't always explained very well.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-16 ch 13,	abuseOkay, so I was only supposed to be reviewing every two chapters but that was so cute. So, so cute. I loved what he said to her and how they're all running together and whatnot. So cute. I hate running, but if there was a cutie, I just might do it lol. Nice one.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-16 ch 12,	abuseWell I really liked this, it had length to it. Finally! LoL. It was awesome but what was up with the formatting? Shouldn't their speech have been seperated? Like it was in the end rather then the beginning? I don't know, anyways, it was really good. Anyhow, I'll probably be posting this interracial story I started today by tomorrow or the next day. Check it out won't you?
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-16 ch 10,	abuseWell chapter 10 was super short but I can deal. I liked it and I hope he and Katrina get together soon.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-15 ch 6,	abuseBrian's family is...they're like the over achievers. I'm so glad my parents listen to me and celebrate the things I do. EVen the little things :D.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-15 ch 4,	abuseThat was cute, the whole "opposites attract" thing. Whcih tottally applies to my parents. My Dad is kind of this crazy, I dunno how to describe him and my Mom is just OUT there but when you look at things like that. You know opposites, they usually have things in common that are way more important than what meets the eye.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-15 ch 2,	abuseThe correct saying is "I head it through the grape vine" but I can get over that :D and anyways it was still cool. Pretty short though.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2008-05-15 ch 1,	abuseI'm a black girl that loves boys with blue eyes...O_o strange lol. Liking this a lot.
johnandvan 2007-09-15 ch 28,	abuseReally nicely told young romance story. I so enjoyed.

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