this makes me cry everytime i read it ... which is like at least once a day since i found it ... i love it ... your talent is amazing

one thing i really like about ur poems is that they tell a story . . . mine tend to just describe a situation but urs describes a sequence of events and i dont think ive ever seen that before . . . i really like this one . . . though ive told u this b4 . . . its depressing in a way that makes one wanna hug u lol . . . neway, as usual, excellent and keep it up ;) :-D
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I really don't see how this goes with Apprehension, but it's you poem thimgy...this one just sounds tragic

suggest rewording a few lines, some seem a bit forced. Nicely done other than a few lines.