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| Stassney 2005-04-08 ch 1,  | abusethis makes me cry everytime i read it ... which is like at least once a day since i found it ... i love it ... your talent is amazing |
| Burning Moon 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuseone thing i really like about ur poems is that they tell a story . . . mine tend to just describe a situation but urs describes a sequence of events and i dont think ive ever seen that before . . . i really like this one . . . though ive told u this b4 . . . its depressing in a way that makes one wanna hug u lol . . . neway, as usual, excellent and keep it up ;) :-D "n thats the way the cookie crumbles" America's Favorite Cookie |
| Gothic Renegade 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI really don't see how this goes with Apprehension, but it's you poem thimgy...this one just sounds tragic |
| Crelian2202 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abusesuggest rewording a few lines, some seem a bit forced. Nicely done other than a few lines. |