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| Lil Lalita 2004-01-17 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. Kind of long, but still a nice write... I heard if you want to find a guy your same maturity level he has to be 7 years older than you... *shivers* ~Lil Lalita |
| Crelian2202 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done, one line toward the end starts with and, I think the and should be deleted. Simply an oponion tho. |
| VolleyBCutiePie 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuseVery powerful and moving poem! I've been in that position before, when the guy just isn't getting it when its almost obvious that you like him! It gets SO annoying sometimes. LOL! My mom told me that all little boys grow up to be dumb men. And sometimes, I look at my dad, and believe her! LOL! Great poem! Keep up the fantastic writing! ~Rachel P.S. Could you please R and R one of my poems or stories? Thanx! |