 Zeekie 2004-05-10 . chapter 3*reviews*
AH I WANNA KNOW WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN! Update soon before I hurt somebody, lol |
 Zeekie 2004-05-10 . chapter 2REALLY GOOD CHAPTER but i told u that already, lol...heh i wanna play sharp eye sometime...cept without the flying stuff, i mean, i dont know how to do that, lol
YAY AND UR NEXT CHAPTER IS UP! *rushes the end of the review so i can read the next chapter more quickly* |
 animefanatic07 2004-05-09 . chapter 3Another chapter already? Fantastic! This one wasn't too bad, but it was a little slow like you warned. Keep on writing though! Ah... I really can't wait to see what's going to happen. Venn better meet up with Rika again. ::glare:: Hehe... keep the chapters coming! |
 animefanatic07 2004-05-06 . chapter 2Finally! It's about time... goodness. It was a good chapter, but there were some grammatical errors. Your sentences kind of blurred into each other without commas or spaces. I doubt it was you though, probably the computer or something. Very interesting! Keep writing! |
 Emily 2004-03-25 . chapter 1 oh come on katie cant you write faster?
its was good even though ive already read this |
 Zeekie 2004-01-18 . chapter 1YAY U R STARTING THIS STORY YAY
god that was very descriptive and stuff i cant wait until u get this one going too :)
-me |
 animefanatic07 2004-01-17 . chapter 1NEXT CHAPTER! N O W!! now i tell you, now! lol...i already read the second part of the prologue...it's nice to know what rika first thought of earth...great job! |