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| swt_lil_angel_j 2006-11-20 ch 2, anon. | abusethis story is awseome. keep on writing! i love this story so far. |
| Miss-India 2005-04-08 ch 3,  | abuseAnother good story! Update soonSo many love stories starting together lol |
| KnotFamous 2005-04-08 ch 3, | abuseHey! I love the characters on this story! The Dialog rocks too! Thanks for reviewing my story, and check for more too! I will deffinatley be reading your other ones! |
| Nikz99 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseHey, my name's there! XD -Ate Nikka |
| defiance-is-lovely 2004-01-27 ch 3, | abusewhoo good job! i'll be keeping up on this story :) thanks so much for reviewing!! |
| Image of the Invisible 2004-01-25 ch 2, | abuseWAHIHIHIHIHI! kulang pa!! hanggang 5 na!! WAHAHAHAHA! |
| Image of the Invisible 2004-01-23 ch 1, | abuseshet!! cassie!! put up until chappy 5!! dali dali!! mwahaha!! i guess...you know who i am now...keep writin'!! ~> Isa |
| Natalie 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really, really lke this story so far. They really hate each other. It's so cute. And that whole "I believe in a thing called love" thing was funny. Please update soon. |
| lamentation 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! update soon! |
| Sassy Saskia 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abusefun. I want to read more. please update soon. |
| Eleni 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abusearg whens the next chapter coming?!?!? this is a really good story. i love the way they all fight one minute and stick up for each other the next. keep writing! im hooked. |
| SugarHighQT91 2004-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abusethough its pretty good, i also believe that you are going a bit too fast with the storyline. maybe u should first introduce the chracters, in more detail, so we understand their personalities better and so we know what importance they have in the story and how they are related to whoever the main character will be. otherwise, do continue! either way, its ur story, so u dont have to follow any advice! but keep writing! ill keep reading!! |
| ceruleansky89 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abusehey.. you know, the story line is quite fine. but you know...[no offense..] you introduced too many characters all at once.. it could really be a good idea that you introduce them one by one so that the readers[like myself] will not get confused.. hehehe.. so here's your review and i hope that i helped some way! thank you for reading. hope you understand! |