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| Emerald Dragon Star 2008-07-20 ch 56, | abuseLove the story! It's very addicting and I hope you get it published!! ^^ |
| Jibbittessa 2008-07-19 ch 133, | abuseDid Tarl and Matt refer to Kai as different genders...? Tarl said something about a "she" in one line, and the next line Matt was referring to what I thought was the same person as a "he"... Those items seem pretty handy. :D Though they could've used 'em before now. Also: Congratulations on the publishing thing! |
| Emerald Dragon Star 2008-07-18 ch 5, | abuseAmazing!! The characters are creative, I've never seen anything like them before. Bravo on an excellent job!! I give this story a 12! ^^ I hope you get this published, I'll be your #1 fan! |
| Keira Kentai 2008-07-17 ch 133, | abuseCongrats Mya! That is an amazing opportunity, I can't wait to see your books comes out in mass market! Another great chapter by the way, I'm running out of things to say since we are 133 chapters in. =D |
| Emerald Dragon Star 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseKK |
| Carrie 2008-07-16 ch 132, anon. | abuseYay! After nearly two months, the story has been updated! No, really, I am glad to see that Mandy and Sam have finally tied the knot and Mandy (finally) has magic. It's really great to see another update. Believe me, I was extremely excited when I saw there were now 133 chapters. I'd love to see more updates soon! Thanks, Carrie |
| Casey Drake 2008-07-16 ch 133, | abuseWhee! I love crossovers. It's always fun. :D CD |
| Casey Drake 2008-04-30 ch 132, | abuse...Chaos is bound to a river? In any case, le awesome as always. I look forward to the continuing adventures. XD CD |
| Keira Kentai 2008-04-30 ch 132, | abusew00t for Canada! Looking forward to the next chapter as always! |
| EccentricReader 2008-04-29 ch 3, | abuseWhat i meant by people accepting him I mean when he tells them what he really is. The way you set it up with people hating him because of the scale thing hit the nail though. Sorry I just started it over because it has been a while. |
| EccentricReader 2008-04-29 ch 2, | abuseIts been a while since i read this but your style hasn't changed. In most cases thats a good thing. The story is pretty good compared to the usual crap on this site. There are a lot of things that still leave me confused. The first and main thing that bothers me is how accepting most of the people of the truth of the main character. This may not be the darkages but I know plenty of people who would still be in denial, and plenty who would be trying to stone matt to death. If you were to put more thought into there views of his abilities then you couldn't go wrong. Oh wait thats the only problem I have with this story. |
| For What Its Worth 2008-04-27 ch 132, | abuseHmm...Sam, hateful servant of evil! Or not. lol, I like him the way he is. If Mandy didn't get any magic at all, she might have gone crazy. But why exactly was there a crowd around them? What drew them and why did they stay? The part where they were sent back, then started laughing doesn't really seem to fit, either. Maybe if you added more to it or downgraded it to grins...So, Beylaan came and took Sage and Warren. Interesting. :) *hugs for the fast update* |
| Jibbittessa 2008-04-26 ch 131, | abuseWow, it's been awhile since I got around to reading your last few chapters... But like always, you're doing a wonderful job. I'm loving all of the new situations and creatures, and how in depth you're getting even with the more minor characters. Does this count as a message, to give you book ideas? You might like some of my favorite fantasy books... The Usurpers Crown, The Lost Years of Merlin (there are at least three of them), Artemis Fowl... The latter is probably popular enough that you've read it, or heard of it enough to decide if you like it or not. That's all I can think of for now. ^^ Good luck on finding some good books! |
| Keira Kentai 2008-04-21 ch 131, | abuseThanks Mya! I was starting to worry that you had forgotten about your faithful readers! Thanks for the update! |
| schplaat 2008-04-20 ch 131, | abuseAs always, a great chapter, which leaves me needing more, thanks. As for your problem with finding a good author, anything by Raymond E Fiest, Christopher Paolini, Terry Goodkind, and Steven Kings dark tower series, is worth a read. sincerely, schplaat |