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Casey Drake
2008-04-30
ch 132,
abuse...Chaos is bound to a river?

In any case, le awesome as always. I look forward to the continuing adventures.

XD CD
Last Guardian
2008-04-30
ch 132,
abusew00t for Canada! Looking forward to the next chapter as always!
EccentricReader
2008-04-29
ch 3,
abuseWhat i meant by people accepting him I mean when he tells them what he really is. The way you set it up with people hating him because of the scale thing hit the nail though. Sorry I just started it over because it has been a while.
EccentricReader
2008-04-29
ch 2,
abuseIts been a while since i read this but your style hasn't changed. In most cases thats a good thing. The story is pretty good compared to the usual crap on this site. There are a lot of things that still leave me confused. The first and main thing that bothers me is how accepting most of the people of the truth of the main character. This may not be the darkages but I know plenty of people who would still be in denial, and plenty who would be trying to stone matt to death. If you were to put more thought into there views of his abilities then you couldn't go wrong. Oh wait thats the only problem I have with this story.
For What Its Worth
2008-04-27
ch 132,
abuseHmm...Sam, hateful servant of evil! Or not. lol, I like him the way he is. If Mandy didn't get any magic at all, she might have gone crazy. But why exactly was there a crowd around them? What drew them and why did they stay? The part where they were sent back, then started laughing doesn't really seem to fit, either. Maybe if you added more to it or downgraded it to grins...So, Beylaan came and took Sage and Warren. Interesting. :) *hugs for the fast update*
Jibbittessa
2008-04-26
ch 131,
abuseWow, it's been awhile since I got around to reading your last few chapters... But like always, you're doing a wonderful job. I'm loving all of the new situations and creatures, and how in depth you're getting even with the more minor characters.

Does this count as a message, to give you book ideas? You might like some of my favorite fantasy books... The Usurpers Crown, The Lost Years of Merlin (there are at least three of them), Artemis Fowl... The latter is probably popular enough that you've read it, or heard of it enough to decide if you like it or not. That's all I can think of for now. ^^ Good luck on finding some good books!
Last Guardian
2008-04-21
ch 131,
abuseThanks Mya! I was starting to worry that you had forgotten about your faithful readers! Thanks for the update!
schplaat
2008-04-20
ch 131,
abuseAs always, a great chapter, which leaves me needing more, thanks. As for your problem with finding a good author, anything by Raymond E Fiest, Christopher Paolini, Terry Goodkind, and Steven Kings dark tower series, is worth a read.
sincerely, schplaat
fusionbeam
2008-04-19
ch 131,
abusenice left curve i like not knowing wheres there story is going to go i read plots to easily quite often you write well
Chris Rhyanne
2008-04-19
ch 92,
abuseGah! I'm wrenching myself away from the screen with all of the strength I have to stop reading this long enough to post a comment-

Well, I love it, and It's good, and there are minor grammatical errors, and I'm gonna keep reading now. xD Keep writing!
For What Its Worth
2008-04-19
ch 131,
abuseThis is a really great twist! Very exciting and informative. Your explanations and describings are a bit disjointed, though. I'm not sure how to put it other than that. As for good books, Cecilia Dart-Thornton is a very good author with a few interesting trilogies. They are all in a medieval setting with awesome middle english...I don't know if you like that, but it is easy to comprehend. Catharine Asaro writes a good futuristic sci-fi; The Saga of the Skolian Empire series. Star Wars is always BRILLIANT. Particularly the latest two series, The New Jedi Order, and the Legacy of the Force. J. D. Robb (Nora Roberts writing under a psuedonym) has a nice murder/mystery titled the Lietenant Eve Dallas series. I can't remember the author, but Maerlon the Magician and its sequel, Magician's Ward, are good books...lol, I read a lot. Those are all I can think of off the top of my head, if you run out of books, I'll probably remember some more.lol Oh, and a trilogy somewhat resembling What If Dragons are Real beginning with the book Mistress of Dragons. The author has many good books, but I can't remember her name.
Mysti-n
2008-04-18
ch 131, anon.
abuseHey,
Love the story.. very good job with description and having it complex enough to be interesting.
Some of my fav authors:
Robin D. Owens
Michelle Sagara (these two are very new)
Katherine Kerr
Mercedes Lackey
and many many more... lol
Read Harry Potter if you haven't, its a credit to the genre not a hindrance :)
Eragon isn't bad...but you will get trapped waiting for the next one like I am lol. Let me know if you need more Ideas... I been outta college two years and am only starting to get into reading for fun again indepth :)
Casey Drake
2008-04-18
ch 131,
abuseEe, coils within coils, bombshell after bombshell! Lovely!

:D CD
Shadu
2008-04-18
ch 131, anon.
abusethank you for the updates. this is a very good story. It helps me pass time while i work. Also some of these might give you ideas on what to do.

As for your request:
http://sennadar./
You can also go to the forum for more stories.
(a bit silly but i like it)
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those should keep you busy for a while jeje
fusionbeam
2008-03-12
ch 129,
abusecool you updated since i last saw this story is awesome so far keep it up :)
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