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| temblance 2007-01-03 ch 4,  | abuseI like the way you have been describing the people and the ball in the past few chapters-I think that description is one of your stronger points. I have to read more to judge the characters, but I'm looking forward to it! |
| temblance 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very interest-catching first chapter. Now I want to read more! The only thing I found distracting was the authors note in the middle, telling us that Amber was the one in the room. I found that I could figure that out without the note. But that is only a minor detail; I can't wait to read what happens next. Good job. |
| eara 2005-08-02 ch 1, anon. | abusenice story so far :) |
| Denali 2005-07-13 ch 18, | abuseMarcus is bad. Jonathon is good. one vote for him. |
| xpressgirl 2005-07-09 ch 18, | abuseAWESOME STORY! i vote(COUNTDOWN)..3...2...1...THE PRINCE! i really like him! marcus sounds like a REAL jerk to me. not one of those hott, arrogant, you'll-one-day-fall-in-love-with-them guys but a REAL JERK!! please make her go with the prince! |
| ro 2005-07-06 ch 18, anon. | abusemarcus! |
| Fairytale Gurl 2005-07-06 ch 18, | abusetesting smth... |
| WhiteLiliesWithAScar 2005-06-25 ch 18, | abuseSweet! Keep on updating! My vote goes to Marcus...Although I'm so tempted to vote for the Prince. Sigh...but Marcus reminds me of someone so I'll vote for him till the end! |
| Duchess Star 2005-06-20 ch 18, | abuseI think she should go with the Prince. UPDATE SON! Duchess Star |
| Dama Negra 2005-04-22 ch 3, | abusein chapter 3, ok so I may be a pest, but I have two comments to make, in the part where you put the author's note it would've been easier (and wouldn't have interrupted de thread of the story) to write: amber smiled softly, as she only did for her parents, or something like that. i was going to comment on something else but i forgot and my time on the computer's up so I'll keep on reading as soon as I get home |
| Dama Negra 2005-04-22 ch 2, | abusei'm just on chapter two of this story but i'm liking it a lot so far, just one thing, when you wrote expressionless expression, did you mean it to sound like that or did it just come out funny?? by the way, great descriptions |
| blueangel87 2005-01-29 ch 18, | abuseI think she should end up with Marcus ;) |
| jackson and indran 2005-01-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWe really liked your first chapter of your tale...IT WAS SAPY! |
| Dina R. 2005-01-25 ch 18, anon. | abuseHEY! im a new reader, n now a fan. lol. as for the poll, GO PRINCE, GO! screw "marcus". hes a booger. (yes, i AM very immature.) lol. by the way, great job on the story. :) |
| justaregulargirl 2005-01-25 ch 18, | abusehey, i really like your story. i think she should end up with marcus. |