Oh, my.
That is beautiful!
It's like walking into a door to another life, that, for a moment, we are this person, we feel their pain, our pain.
This is absolutly fantastic!

I like the way you wrote this. It seems a relation of the goings on around you with your thoughts on them intertwined. Very neat indeed.

I love this piece and as a writer can relate. The title is so fitting.

It's been a long time since I last visited this site. Looks like I have some catching up to do. You do so well at catching moments. I've probably already said that at some point. I particularly like how you weave the Frankenstein metaphor thoughout the poem.
-byrdgirl

wonderfully thought provoking. enjoyed your imagery greatly. an extremely creative poem about the struggle to create!

i love the cold and the bitterness and the wry sort of acceptance of this. dreadfully odd poem, rather addictive too!

Brother, you keep getting better. This is beautifully written. Wonderful similies and metaphors. I was going to say you spelled psych wrong, because I thought you were going to be saying psyche. Then I actually read the line and realized that you're a genius. Your mixture of subtle humour in with something so profoundly moving as this...wow.

I'm not sure what to say. This is the first piece of contemproary poetry that has actually caught my interest and kept it.