This is a really good story. I really enjoyed reading it. One question. You know Charon's eye is yellow, were they yellow when he was a human?

I still like this story

It was good

Poor Charon. Micheal really is a twisted f*er. I love Charon. He is so sweet. No one would think that, but then again I`m not really normal.

aw, poor charon!Well written and presented.

Deliciously Angsty. not too graphic but quite descriptive. theres something odd about it I just cant get my finger on and its at the tip of my tongue.. but otherwise its a very nice fic. The ominous ending was a bit cleshed but a nice touch anyway.

i agree wit kit. yeh, he's horrible but...*cnt think of anything 2 xcuse that* er...EVIL BISHI WIT LONG HAIR!

I love it, it's awsome!! :D :D plaease write more!

Okay, i'm going to make a lot of people really angry, but i think Michael is awesome. He's great character..even if he is horrible to Charon. He's a sadistic bastard and i love him. He's my favorite..
..okay, done now before you people start getting torches and pitchforks..

Nicely written...you do a good job of making the reader symphatise with Charon...I like his "Charon understands" bit, but then I like catchphrase-y type things *smiles* Yup, Micheal is evil.

Poor Charon-chan, he's too adorable. Bad Michael!!

Charon! My poor baby!! Damn Michael!! I can't believe I almost missed this update! Charon's my favorite Char in Avalon!!
Anyways, love this story. Poor, poor Charon...he's soo mentally tortured!
Keep it up! :p *im so evil*...

Aww, poor Charon. I can safely say that Micheal is scarier to me than Tetsu...

Awesome story. :D You portrayed Micheal wonderfully, and aw...poor Charon. ;-; I love him.