Oh, this is written in a very interesting format. I like the touch where you add the one two lines of run-on words, as if you don't actually want to say the words seperately because you're afraid of them or something. (?? ^_^;; ) Nice poem. ^^

I like this, its an interesting form of writing but I really enjoyed it, keep up the great work.

Oh, I like that. I really do like that. Nice original message. I'm wondering if you were thinking of anyone in particular.

This is so cool. I love the idea and it is so relevant to everyday life. Indeedy.

Way to get the word out.

Lol, i like this one a lot. Especially luv the run on sentences.

Hm. For some reason...this is so abrupt...it seems like you're talking directly to someone on our plane of existence. I liked this - period at the end makes me ears itch...no wait, it doesn't. It makes perfect sense and it should be there, really... okay. Liked this. Would like to know to whom you were speaking.

'm not sure if the run on words impact the piece as much as you want them to. I do believe I can imagine the picture you had, but it doesn't seem quite as...rushed as it should be

*gigglegigglesquirm* oh i love it... another happy poem by floofy! YAY!