beautiful writing

Its nice...down to the point.

omg! How do you write stuff relates to everybody so much?

*sniffles* - absolutely gorgeous! I really like the 2nd stanza where everything flows so nicely... and the 1st stanza had great description... I like how you got the idea of happiness, but at the same time hoping not to lose it, and putting faith in things that everything will stay happy... Great work!

Wow...I likes.
I wish I could write like that...*pouts*

very romantic _ it's like one jumble of thoughts that leave you feeling... hopful i guess. Humm... im not doing a good job explaning why i like it am i? oh well, good job!

This is very nice. The rythm is, for the most part, very good. I believe you could improve the fluidity of the poem, but the imagery is quite good, and overall, I like your style.
This is very nice work.
And, I'm slightly confused as to your review of my short story, although I could possibly understand your confusion at reading it. By way of apology, let me say that I was very very bored when I wrote it.

hahahahahahahahah
i didnt even read it but o well
wont let me type ml !
mlmlml ok iwon twttwtwtwtwtw

Pretty! The rhyme isn't exact, but I didn't really care all that much, lol.

I like the usage of launguage in this poem. You should write less stories, and more poetry. ;)

That was sweet :) I thought the last paragraph was the best though.

Great job. I like the metaphors.

this is a tottally awsome poem i like it ! great flow of words

yeah i know that feeling, it sucks, the last time i had to choose, i had choosing, and letting go.. it hurts... deep (*painful memories*)

ah *_*, not traditional poem yet so good! has a (let's see if i can spell this at midnight) unicness (i know it's rong, i no care.) anwho, i like it, i liked it a lot, i... i need to be in bed.
later