 A.K.A. Writer's Block 2008-12-23 . chapter 1I love you for this.
Can't they just chill? |
 wishing/dreaming/waiting 2005-05-28 . chapter 1Okay, so I had to put you on my Favorite Author's list. Just because I'm cool like that and I wish I could write like you. You're very talented. And there's no more I can say. |
 M.P. Solo 2005-04-26 . chapter 1I hate elitism. People who get carried away in their pride are likely to be less constructive than those who still look to achieve some greatness...after all, if you're already the elite, what motivation do you have to excel further?
I know it's kinda random to review this now, after it's been around so long, but I thought I'd let you know I'm still around. Good luck with your novel! b^-^d |
 Tessabe 2005-02-07 . chapter 1You had me laughing with one of your reviews, keep poking pins in the airbags. It's great fun. I love this poem. |
 Rio Madeira 2005-01-11 . chapter 1This is excellent work! The rhymes and the meter are practically perfect, and that little sarcasm at the end gives it a great touch. Keep up the good stuff. |
 Sammy- B 2004-12-12 . chapter 1ha! thats awesome! made me crack up on the last line!
awesome!
Sammy-B!! |
 Raven Aorla 2004-04-30 . chapter 1Bitingly sarcastic and great punchline. I'd like to have SOME people that I know to read this...
And great ingenuity in your rhyme scheme. The rhythm is also flawless. |
 Dylan Wiles 2004-01-21 . chapter 1 ROTFL. Way to take 'em down honey. As usual , right on the money.
Dylan |
 Medron Pryde 2004-01-18 . chapter 1LOL That one is really funny. Funny and true, in a sad way. I love how you nail generalizations like that. |