Reviews for If I Were Perfect

Lover-of-Heartbreak 2004-04-01 ch 1,	Good rhythem...I can't relate I've never known my father.
Anna 2004-02-16 ch 1,	I love the poem don't change it at all it's perfect.
that ed kidd. 2004-02-07 ch 1,	This is amazing..and I understand how you feel. Great work on this. :)
BlackOleander 2004-01-19 ch 1,	this is really really good!! i just wrote a poem kind of like it...but anyway...this is very well written!! ^^
Filia Regalis 2004-01-19 ch 1,	Oh, this is the sweetest, saddest poem I have ever read! (I know, I say that all the time, but it's true every time!) But honestly, your dad does love you, this I know, he just doesn't understand you totally. Still this is an awesome poem, and I'm so glad you are able to express yourself in such a beautiful way.
PrincessSelphie 2004-01-19 ch 1,	This is really quite tragic in many ways...ah...my dad is an idot but I still know that feeling of wanting him to be pleased with me. great poem, nice work! ^_^