Wow. How did you know about this little problem I have in my life? Well done, I sympathize with the message in the poem and it was well written. Kudos!

its like 14 things i hate about u... nice idea.. this poem is nice and thoughtful and really captures d feeling of unrequited love... its a wonderful poem... well done!love and admiration Gretchen45 xplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot!! tanx x

such a cute consept.. i love this poem

Cute poem. Sounds a lot like a problem I have lol. IT doesn't sound forced and the flow is consistent, GREAT JOB:):)

OOh I think I know what you mean...
Only along with the fluttering feeling, I get the urge to pee my pants.