How true, how true. Great job.

btw, IM SOO SORRY ITS TAKEN ME SO LONG TO NOTICE THAT I MISSED YOUR REVIEWS PLEASE FORGIVE ME! anywho, I'll be working hard to make up, so please don't me mad at me! *puppy dog eyes*
wow, you're good at making a bright image but still making the overall feeling dark and separated. I totally get that feeling all the time. I live right by chicago, and I hate how I can't see the stars when I go into the city. This is very easy and good to connect to.
you have a very deep way of looking at things. Keep up the great work!
ja ne!
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Interesting poem. Wasn't realyy poem-like, really just a piece on your thoughts.

I agree. I love the city, but not the commercialness of it or how it ruins the skyline. Ah, if only I could find a small, countryside town with the same atmosphere that the city has.