black turtleneck, pants, boots and beret? I love it.
This has a great use of words and flows very nicely - great job.
kess

lol. not all poets are depressed. _
wow, you better hope that's not how you'll end up... you've got talent. Good flow, good use of wording, good imagery. what else can I say? good job.
ja ne
-pont

he he he he... nice use of sarcasm.

i couldn't see the sarcasm. not really. i might have. where is it?

Wow. This is kind of sad. It takes all of the graneur out of being a poet and instead adds feeling to the reality that we will have to face someday. Great idea. Keep up the good work!

i think you're a fine poet, really. P and if anyone wants to come over here and prove me wrong...

I don't agree... You are a real poet. Perhaps an amateur poet, but all it takes to be a real poet is to write poetry from the heart.

None of us are real poets. Hell, I'm a better math student than a writer. It may sound cliche but keep at it. Yes, that saying does work.