Alright... one word. More. Lol, what can I say, it was fantastic, your words like wine. Really I'm at a loss of words it was brilliant and i would really like to see more,
-Kel

Alright, so I wasn't going to review until I finished reading it all because that is generally what I do, but I couldn't let the fresh memories of this fade. It was brilliant! Now, I can't say exactly why, but it was everything all at once, the tone, the description, everything. Your word flow was adicting, I didn't want to stop once I started.
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I remeber reading the Prolouge for this, and now I hate you. >< I liked this one. It reminds me oddly of Toboe from Wolf's Rain...>> He's slowly but surely becoming my new obsession.

at first i was a little lost...but...thats me but...goodness, i love this.
you do have a way with words.

Yes, somewhat confusing indeed, but you're writing is very beautiful. I liked the two lines about innocence, in particular. There are one main question I had about this. What is the history behind the evil man and the narrator? Logically, where I see this going next is some short of explanation about the light that can't be seen.