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| Puffy Marshmallow 2004-02-13 ch 4, | Great job! keep up the good work! |
| Puffy Marshmallow 2004-02-05 ch 3, | Great story! It's so cool that she can talk to "lost spirit" keep up the good work, I love your story! (: |
| dreamingAreality18 2004-02-05 ch 1, | Your story is greeat! :-) keep writing!!~ |
| Sam 2004-01-24 ch 2, | Hey! tres cool story, but i gotta go. Just wanted to let you know that i had read it! One suggestion, though. Proof read, like in project LIFT *crosses eyes* Buh-bye! I'm gonna read the rest later. -Sam |
| Holly J Cappen 2004-01-21 ch 2, | This is a really good plotline. The only bit that you could have done better was in the end of the first chapter. Viv sort of jumps straight in (without a fuss) to her new job. |