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Puffy Marshmallow
2004-02-13
ch 4,
Great job! keep up the good work!
Puffy Marshmallow
2004-02-05
ch 3,
Great story! It's so cool that she can talk to "lost spirit" keep up the good work, I love your story! (:
dreamingAreality18
2004-02-05
ch 1,
Your story is greeat! :-) keep writing!!~
Sam
2004-01-24
ch 2,
Hey! tres cool story, but i gotta go. Just wanted to let you know that i had read it! One suggestion, though. Proof read, like in project LIFT *crosses eyes*
Buh-bye! I'm gonna read the rest later.
-Sam
Holly J Cappen
2004-01-21
ch 2,
This is a really good plotline. The only bit that you could have done better was in the end of the first chapter. Viv sort of jumps straight in (without a fuss) to her new job.
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