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kiboki-kun 2008-09-06 ch 13,	This story is so cute! I just love how you made Teddy it reminds me of my little brother. Great writing.
Addaline Marie Scio 2008-07-28 ch 13,	Of all the stories I've read on fp, I've got to say this one really shines! Very sweet and romantic. I expecially want to give you kudos for having an awesome first chapter and for the character Teddy. Children in literature always seem to just be mini adults, but Teddy was 100% a kid. An extremely intelligent, observant, and outspoken kid, but definatly a kid at heart. Wonderful job!
Lovedward48 2008-06-08 ch 13,	Yay!! Awesome! Jae, Lucas und Teddy are so cute!! Good job!! :)
xbloodxmagnoliax 2007-06-25 ch 1,	omg i completely and totally adore this story its so cute (and if i may say very well written) keep writing! ~magnolia
Starflower-gem 2007-06-04 ch 1,	wow...that has to be the most entertaining first chapter I've ever read...great job. Star
The Intelligent Designer 2007-04-10 ch 13,	Oh, it's cute. Nice job, I enjoyed it. To be honest, the only reason I started reading it was because I saw the name Lucas...I love that name so much! It's like, my favorite name in the world! Great story though too.
Prisoner-11 2006-04-08 ch 13,	Aw...so sweet!
Cookie Gestapo 2005-06-24 ch 13,	Coolio storie way intresting and mushy. Adorable really though I wish we could have learned more about Both Lucus's and Jae's past relationships. I dunno. It would have helped ot better understand the characters though they were easy to understand I guess. Good storie any ways.
PirateGrrl 2005-04-05 ch 13,	This was absolutely beautiful! I'm glad Cecila wasn't a total ** and decided she liked Jae (nice name btw) in the end. Lukas is such a cool guy! I'm glad they were able to talk things out. It frustrates me when characters run around talking to themselves instead of the person they need to talk to. Clark equals bastard. Teddy is so adorable! I just loved his random "I'm allergic to cheese" comment. Hilarious! You are such a talented writer! I loved that this had believable characters and plot. I really enjoyed it! Good times, friend. Good times! pets Write more; you're lovely. :D
Tate Soyker 2005-03-01 ch 13,	OMG this was such a sweet story! I absolutely loved it! You have a lot of talent as a writer keep up the good work.
c'est moi 2005-01-29 ch 12,	Okay, I know I haven't reviwed in a while. And I feel really bad, becuase it's really cute. It's just so cute! Congrats on an excellent story. Really. It's just so... SQUEE, you know? --KATHERINE
subtleline 2005-01-04 ch 13,	This was just plain cute. I mean, it's realistic yet adorably sappy at times. I luv it. Although in my world, Clark would have been made to suffer but that's the sadism talkin. I just loved Teddy. To tell the truth I actually have a lil side-story bout him and that bully. No intention of writing or anything but in my mind its cute. Thanks for sharing this.
Theron Laganas (aka Dean) 2005-01-02 ch 13,	Congratulations... another good story finished, one more notch on your belt. Yes this was a little bit cheesy, but coming from me that really means nothing. It was cute as hell and filled with the fuzzies. Luke deserves to finally have someone. He's such a "nice guy". I'm glad things worked out well for him and Jae. "Far From Grace" had such a sudden ending that this seems far more appropriate. I would've caused you severe physical pain if you'd decided to kill one of them or something -- I've seen it happen way too often. So well done and I hope you write MANY MANY MANY more stories in the future. :P
Cheyenne 2004-12-27 ch 13,	AW. That was so beautiful.
Slim 2004-12-22 ch 13,	Aw! This is a beautiful story, and the way you ended it is so sweet. I'm glad they're back together and everything is going well for them again. I'm also glad Cecilia has changed her mind. That makes things all the more better. ^_^ I really hope you get another story up soon; I love reading your stuff! XD Merry Christmas!

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