Never thought of it that way...

Dude! I really don't like whores. I love this poem, though! A and good job all around _ Keep writing!

Interesting haiku. Hm...the idea of flirting popped into my head for a minute. Keep up the nice work.

That was rated PG-13? I think it should have been PG, personally. It wasn't terrible. ::nods:: Very..um... SEDUCTIVE. :D

*whore's deadly web*
Very intriguing line.

"Foolishly lustful" is a unique and clever phrase but it also doesn't flow very well. Also, "hordes" and "whore's" sound almost the same so it sounds awkward to have them seperated by only one syllable. But I could definitely picture the moment with your descriptive words.

Well written, I just don't understand. Sorry :)