awe-inspiring. beautiful. you are weaving masterpieces with your words, and your audience applauds, calling for more...

sitting here, in my newly demented and broken chair, i thought to myself (yes i really did think)if ur stuck in a moment, and everything is happening around u and ur missing out on a lot of events and stuff, it doesnt really matter if as long as u have friends. cause they're bound to cheer u up, and do things that friends do. and thats a great thing to have happen to u.

Try to avoid starting lines with 'but' it is a very weak starting word, usually the line sounds better without it. Other than that well done.