|Reviews for Till You Return|
| Schatten Katze 3/20/11 . chapter 1
There is always an end... but there is equally a beginning. Now that this poem has ended- how will you begin again? When your skies have cleared and you have been turned- what will be revealed to you then? THIS is a good poem.
| Infinite Smiles 2/26/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I can feel such longing in teh poem .. and I love the concept behind these to lines...
"The sands of time filter through,
We're due to be turned soon."
Very creative. Bravo!
| A. Bush 1/24/04 . chapter 1
that was very touching
just so happens you inspired me as far as a previous peom goes called colors
the poem i wrote is called Collage of the sea
check it out and thank you for the inspiration
| Seraphim of the Dark Moon 1/20/04 . chapter 1
Very nicely executed. Very soft and pale feeling it gives. Don't worry about putting end...because if you think about it...there is never and end; and I know you know what I am talking about. Keep smiling kid, and keep writing. Blessings to you.
| Keane 1/20/04 . chapter 1
Thats really good, someone has finally put down in words what i feel, amazing, love it really love it!