There is always an end... but there is equally a beginning. Now that this poem has ended- how will you begin again? When your skies have cleared and you have been turned- what will be revealed to you then? THIS is a good poem.

Beautiful. I can feel such longing in teh poem .. and I love the concept behind these to lines...
"The sands of time filter through,
We're due to be turned soon."
Very creative. Bravo!

that was very touching
just so happens you inspired me as far as a previous peom goes called colors
the poem i wrote is called Collage of the sea
check it out and thank you for the inspiration

Very nicely executed. Very soft and pale feeling it gives. Don't worry about putting end...because if you think about it...there is never and end; and I know you know what I am talking about. Keep smiling kid, and keep writing. Blessings to you.

Thats really good, someone has finally put down in words what i feel, amazing, love it really love it!