|Reviews for Invisible|
| far-away-dreamer 3/3/04 . chapter 1
I like this one. Simple, yet deep. And there's some emotion that runs through my body when I read it, but I'm not quite sure what it is.
| The Zaniak 1/21/04 . chapter 1
Short, yet to the point. I liked this, because even though you only used...9 words, I understood exactly what you meant. Nice use of commas, too.