good job right here. i like it. keep on writing. rnr mine too.

Okay I'm so sorry I stole your story element, I just kind of have a question reguarding the Twisted Mirror. Okay so Matt is Saphire's father and Sweet Eternity knew that Sprout and Matt were sleeping together so how come Alana and Jess pushed Lucky and Matt together? I'm sure that they knew that Matt had a daughter but wouldn't they have told Lucky? Please hurry and email me back because I was thinking about this all day.
By the way, I tried to email you and I couldn't so I had to find a way to send you this.

Nice use of metaphors! I really liked it!
PS: Um... Could you please readmy song, Standing Alone? I just need opinions to see if I'm good at this. I'd appreciate it if you would!

o i love hte paint metaphor... awesome poem...

*finger paints* I gave you the itty bitty inspiration! Waha! All confuzzling but I like it!