You can tell just by the word choice that this is definitely a work of art. This was put together just to create images in your mind and to make you think, and that's what I love about this.
Awesome job, hopefully you write more soon.
~Lidless Eye

this has a distinct sadness to it that makes it oh-so-interesting to read. i really like how the history behind it is rather vague ~ it almost lets you put yourself in the situation and find an aspect of your life that fits into the mold. my favorite aspect was your expert use of repetition in the different stanzas ~ it did wonders for the flow and the feeling. great conclusion, as well. excellent piece. :)

wow...so touching and intense... very well written, i especially liked the twist about the muse being but 10 years old... excellent job.
chloe