You're off to a very good start! How dare you leave us at a cliffy... kidding! :] Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Go with my blessings (snickers) +_+

My gosh! Our fox and angel are going to be dads! *is very giddy*

Ya well ya can't quit yet ... and do be careful with that broom ... Kaia caries the child and well I think Tenshi will get mad at you if you break Li.

You should have Li & Tenshi adopt Sen! I'm not kidding they would fit prefectly together. And Joshua...he creeps me out, badly. Send him away.. please? *begs for you to update & send Joshua away*

Ok i'm like so excited, the sequel, the sequel! PLEASE UPDATE\continue\advance\... PLEASE!

omg!! you stopped updating!! how could you?!?! i trusted you...*sobs* poor sen. he needs someone to cuddle with him. could you plz update?? i'll love you forever if you do... and i would review again if that would make a better bribe..

::gasp:: OMGravitation...what's going on?! I wanna know? Oi oi update as soon as you get the chance to ne? btw, 'Five Rules For Dating My Teenage Son' was as funnies an iono what ^^V Teeheehee. I hope that you post up the next chapter soon!! Take care~Hoshi

This is a great story so far and I can't wait to find out what Kaia has to tell Tenshi. I read Five Simple Rules and I think this is a great sequal. Update quickly please! ^-^

*claps* very nice very very nice! I loved FSR and im luvin this too the surgate mother idea is great and I love Senjurou. He so cue *hugz sen* continue writing and be sure my friends and i continue reading! kudos and hugs to ya
-Jen

Poor Tenshi. He's as funny as ever. *huggles* Despite Josh and his creepy smile I like him. I love mismatch eyes and he is just so intriguing. I think I'll take him and run away with him. You don't mind if I kidnap him do you? Of course if he is a bad guy I'll have to spank him. (I can't believe i just said that) Anywho UPDATE!

JOSHUA SCARES ME BIG TIME! can i burn him? *blinks cutely* I know... not nice... BUT HE JUST CREEPS THE LIVING HELL OUT OF ME! O_O... seriously. X3... ehehe... But.. am I allowed to burn him? Like... umm... throw him in a bon fire? Can I do that? Oh... yeah... I want more of this. I'm just so happy there's a sequel. it makes me mewy. X3 Yes... that's right... I said mewy. Don't ask. Not even I know half the time. But... arigato for reviewing DTL! I've got up to chappy six up if you can make time to read the rest. My pal taruto wrote chapter 6 though, so if it's ten (hundred) times better writting wise... praise the sis. *mew* Okies. I gotta go! Cha!

Dear Kenyako,
OSTL? Hmm...Why do I suddenly think of the NFL? *looks at TV to see what's on* *watches a bunch of idiots chase after a ball* Oh... *looks back to story* In any case, I understand how you feel KD, about the whole "sequels are just never as good as the originals." I think it was Disney that ruined that for us... Yeah... Ever since Disney started the Cinderella, Lady and the Tramp, Beauty and the Beast, and all those other stories' sequels, America has lost all hope in the seconding coming of anything... Even Christ. *points over to a bunch of dead people standing in the alley, still holding up picket signs that Christ will come again...and are being poked by small children that pass by* *sighs* Yep, all faith in the sequel is dead...*gives it a gravestone* But, then again, perhaps your story will be the one that makes it all come back! *hoping...hoping...hoping...*
Inoki: *scoffs* What the hell are you talking about? All sequels are dead, and this one will be no different! Isn't that why you aren't going to make a sequel for PwC? After all, it's the smart thing to do...
*GROWLS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !* INOKI! If you say ONE MORE INSULTING THING towards either KD or Lena, I'm going to CASTRATE YOU! ! ! ! ! ! ! -_O+ *twitchies*
Inoki: O_O *turns and runs, far and fast*
*panting* Okay then...Where were we? Ah, yes... The fact that this sequel is by far my favorite (Aside from WIT and few others), SO YOU MUST CONTINUE IT! Just because you don't have many reviewers, doesn't mean you should lose faith in your story! I mean, look at Broken Bird for me? It's only gotten 20 some-odd reviews, but I'm still trying... even though right now I taking a bit of a break... -_-;; School...evil...evil School...
Thus, you should not give up hope! ^_^ And, besides, I want to see that freak Joshua GET HIS ASS KICKED BY LI! ! ! ! *gives Li a pair of boxing gloves and puts the two in the ring* GO! *watches as Li kicks the SNOT out of Joshua* *happyhappy* But, yeah, that guy serious makes me want to kick his ass... Why must he be all "I don't care if you have a husband, cause I want your ass" and crap like that? Doesn't he know that this is TENSHI we're talking about? The sexy, somewhat flakey -_-;; but utterly cute little girly-guy that has a heart of gold AND NOT TO MENTION A SEXY-ASS BOYFRIEND THAT WILL KILL HIM?! I think Tenshi should just let Li kick his butt... Yes...And then get thrown in jail...No... Okay, now I can see why Ten wouldn't want to do that...(...cause then Li would end up being the wife of inmate #245, a huge guy they all call "Burtha." *cold shivers*) Though I do think Joshua at least needs ONE FRICKIN' SLAP! ! ! *looks to Tenshi* Well, COME ON! HIT HIM! *glares* *sighs* Oh, well... I guess even Joshua isn't worth Tenshi getting all riled up about, but that kid and his FATHER! ! ! ! ! *GROWLS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !* *tries to rip the guy's head off, but is held back by Anthony*
Anthony: *glares at Kenyako* Okay... Now I'm DOUBLY mad at you... First of all, you were evil to Aku in Crimson River, and NOW you're having a child be, for no reason other than his own preferences and opinions, abused by this FATHER! *sniffles* You're so...MEAN! *runs off crying*
*is let go, and tears the evil father dud to shreds* *begins to wipe blood off with wet washcloth* *sighs* Ah...That feels better. ^_^ Anyways, I really did think that Tenshi didn't do the right thing just then... He should have told the Feds, because child abuse, even if it's the first offense, should NOT be allowed! But, then again, that's what I believe... I think Tenshi should have just told that man that he was going to take his son from him, if he did not stop hurting him. Then, if the man got volitile, throw Joshua at him and watch as both destroy each other; it's like killing two birds with one stone! -^_^-
Anthony: *laments the death of both birds*
*sweat drop* Um...Either way, this was a GREAT chapter, and I can't wait to read more!! I really want to see what happens when Li actually gets a chance to meet this...*gag*...Joshua! I want to see Li and Tenshi get cuddly! I WANT TO SEE KITAROU GET A BRAIN!! Oh, and I also want to see what happens with the baby... *sighs contentedly* Baby...YE! ^_^ I can't wait! *happyhappy for Tenshi and Li* Anyways, much love! Toodles! : )
~Repsychus~

I really love this story. Please continue to update!! I want to read about they baby. Aw...gotta love babies. XD

According to a friend of mine, you've dissed this fic. I donno fo sure, cuz i don't interact with such shitty asses. But don't go around dissin people's work, cuz that just shows that you're a fuckin coward. I've read several of KD's works, and, personally, I don't see wut u gotta diss any of her works for. If you got some beef to dish out, then start over here. Cuz you fuckin messin with KD is messin with Lena, her beta reader; and I don't like people messin with any of my friends. Yo, don't get me mad, aiite? I swear, if you got some shit, lemme see some backbone to that.
To KD: I don't kno why i keep forgettin to review for your story... but I've been doin that a lot lately. SORRY! *bows million times*

sounds cool i hope you keep on, though sometimes there are things that you could make shorter but nah it's fine ^~

Ararar Sen-kun needs a nice loving boyfriend (but please not Joshua, because all that guy needs is...umm...) but anyway...surrogate mothers are cool (turkey baster!) and stuff, and Li and Tenshi need a child ^_^
Write more soon. Pwease. With sugah on top, eh?
~Magenta!