   Casey Drake 2006-02-17 . chapter 2Interesting...
:) CD |
 tsu-chan 2005-10-02 . chapter 2 CONTINUE YOU MUST!! YODA COMMANDS YOU!!lol now with the randomness out of the way, dont be afraid of messing this story up, thats impossible seeing as how youre such a great writer, dont be afraid to continue cmon think of it if people went around thinking i cant continue this because id spoil it thered be like no MARSHMELLOWS AND SMORES and...stuff lol. please continue this it will be awesome |
| Liza Lew 2004-01-27 . chapter 2 Yay! Yay! Yay!-write more pwese! |
| Liza Lew 2004-01-22 . chapter 1 oh you butt! why, oh why did you have to leave it at a cliff-hanger?!?
it's really good. argh! stupid authors with stupid cliffhangers! |
 Dagny Royce 2004-01-20 . chapter 1Very interesting concept, I can't wait to read more. Get a bit more explaination. Also, love the cliff-hanger... it just means you'll have to read more or be hounded by your readers. |
 Dreame 2004-01-20 . chapter 1aww! Darn you for leaving it off as a cliff-hanger. Teheh, well then, in that case I shall be back for the next chapter. ^_^ very good by the way |
 Forrester Woude 2004-01-20 . chapter 1Great story. I was captivated. Please write more; you are a very good writer. |
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