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| ErgoSchmergo 2005-01-01 ch 4,  | abuseand u just leave this story too?...:o( but but...oh well i can't complain, i've only got poetry, i can't ever get past the first paragraph in stories...it's just...oh well...well written, yet again, i just wish u'd finish the stories...hahaha ok i'm over it. this probably won't be the last reveiw u see from me. lol ;o) |
| baaa 2004-08-04 ch 4, anon. | abusethats is so sweet i love it! |
| write thing 2004-07-31 ch 4, | abusei despise andy - great story. christina sounds like a bit of a ** too |
| QueenRemge13 2004-07-27 ch 4, | abuseOh that bites, how could he go out with her? I would totally slap her! :-D QR |
| Lola 2004-07-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseIt's okay...I guess. But it could be so much better with some work and alittle re-working. Though, i'm curiouse to read more, please update |
| x3PreshuzZ 2004-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow evil!?.. next chapter! |
| babydreams5088 2004-06-23 ch 3, | abusehmm..like your story...update please |
| Lostparamwen 2004-06-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseWell she's MEAN! funny though... |
| QueenRemge13 2004-05-04 ch 3, | abuse:-D, I'm so glad you continued it! (Yipee!) QR |
| chiney 2004-04-24 ch 2, anon. | abusedat girl iust evil. just plain evil. |
| QueenRemge13 2004-04-06 ch 2, | abuseOh that evil *! Someone should drown her within an inch of her life, smack her around a little, threaten her with a knife then toss her off a bridge! So all and all I like it so far! QR |
| QueenRemge13 2004-04-06 ch 1, | abuseDang man, someone needs to drown that girl within a inch of her life! QR |
| Sarah Snickerdoodle 2004-03-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat sroty so far! I just saw one thing: ~...going to Nona's house. ...for Nona's house. ...to Nona's house...~ "Nona's house" is a bit overused. You might want to change it, or conjoin the sentences. |
| stacy 2004-03-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseits really cool and you need to finish it |
| BleedingClowns13 2004-02-16 ch 1, | abusewow lol. Interesting...update soon, it's pretty good heh. -Mandy- |