Hits a painful chord...
Beautifully written. War sucks.

Its beautiful. Wonderful portrayle of the ravigeing of war.

What a powerful poem. The desciptions are maddeningly truthful. If there were more people like you in the world who aren't afraid to write things like this, we'd be a lot better off. Great job, keep it up!

Wow... this is such a poignant piece. It completely blew me away, particularily the ending because I wasn't expecting that. Very, very powerful... the imagery is incredible and the emotion is... breathtaking.