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| Linmenel 2004-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseHits a painful chord... Beautifully written. War sucks. |
| sacredwarrior 2004-01-22 ch 1, | abuseIts beautiful. Wonderful portrayle of the ravigeing of war. |
| nononconformist 2004-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWhat a powerful poem. The desciptions are maddeningly truthful. If there were more people like you in the world who aren't afraid to write things like this, we'd be a lot better off. Great job, keep it up! |
| Sarah Parker 2004-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWow... this is such a poignant piece. It completely blew me away, particularily the ending because I wasn't expecting that. Very, very powerful... the imagery is incredible and the emotion is... breathtaking. |