 SumiFritzN 2004-04-04 . chapter 1Answering your own questions. Awsome. It kinda reminds me of a poem lindsay wrote a while ago about her sister. It's a really neat idea for the format and stuff. Practice what you preach lauren! j/k. Sorry. Couldn't resist. I like this one. This is saftly one of my favorites of yours. Keep writing! |
 dragongurl99 2004-01-28 . chapter 1hehe i like it! clever, i like how it goes back and forth. can relate to schizo... split personalities are fun! hehe. nice work |
 Alexis 2004-01-27 . chapter 1 This poem was tight. I especailly like this part: "Why can't I be pretty?"
("Why do you think you're not?)
"Why don't I have friends?"
("Cause you're too blind to see them")
"Why can't I do any thing right?"
("Cause everyone else is wrong!". That's really nice and when do you do these? At school in bio? It's really nmice I like all of it but the part above was my favorite.. |
 Lellida 2004-01-21 . chapter 1unless your split personality is ME! mwahaha... interesting. You were very bored I see |