|Reviews for Memory Lane|
| xDancingintheRainx 5/16/07 . chapter 1
I like the imagery you portrayed in this piece. I really can't imagine having to move as many times as you have in such a short space of time. There is so much emotion in this piece and you put it down on paper really well. Great work!
| CHIIJOY 2/5/07 . chapter 1
"Bound in by things you could never understand."
I love-love your writing style. Great job.
| stealingzephyrs 9/15/06 . chapter 1
I really like this! I can identify with it easily. I'm always stuck in the memories... Nice job.
| Infinite Abyss 6/20/05 . chapter 1
| Mercutio's Heir 1/23/05 . chapter 1
This is so deep...and really, really good. I love it. You are a TRUE writer. I feel the same way, but could never put it into words...I'll say it again. This is a really good poem, one of the best I've ever read. Keep writing.
| lilyqueen777 10/14/04 . chapter 1
i seem lost everydays and my memories don't even help me. its a very deep poem, and i love how it is! keep writing you got great potential as a poet! )
| a e i o u and sometimes y 6/2/04 . chapter 1
I really like this, probably because I can empathize with you perfectly. I always love but at the same time hate those little walks down 'memory lane.' Nothing like it to make you want to keep your friends closer to you, huh?
| Toondra 3/28/04 . chapter 1
this is deep, i really, really, really like it great jobbers!
| confused being99 2/16/04 . chapter 1
i like it, its a very sad remenisent, sad good job
| freedman121 1/21/04 . chapter 1
Great poem. Just I must admit, it is a little weird how it rhymes in the end, but not in the beginning.
However, I am not a poet... so I don't think that you should listen to me.
| Soul Rebel 1/21/04 . chapter 1
The way you use your words to envoke emotion and image is wonderful. Keep up the beauty!