I like the imagery you portrayed in this piece. I really can't imagine having to move as many times as you have in such a short space of time. There is so much emotion in this piece and you put it down on paper really well. Great work!

"Bound in by things you could never understand."

I love-love your writing style. Great job.

I really like this! I can identify with it easily. I'm always stuck in the memories... Nice job.

Great poem.

This is so deep...and really, really good. I love it. You are a TRUE writer. I feel the same way, but could never put it into words...I'll say it again. This is a really good poem, one of the best I've ever read. Keep writing.

i seem lost everydays and my memories don't even help me. its a very deep poem, and i love how it is! keep writing you got great potential as a poet! =)

I really like this, probably because I can empathize with you perfectly. I always love but at the same time hate those little walks down 'memory lane.' Nothing like it to make you want to keep your friends closer to you, huh?

this is deep, i really, really, really like it great jobbers!!

i like it, its a very sad remenisent, sad good job

Great poem. Just I must admit, it is a little weird how it rhymes in the end, but not in the beginning.
However, I am not a poet... so I don't think that you should listen to me.
Freedman

The way you use your words to envoke emotion and image is wonderful. Keep up the beauty!