*has only just found the reveiw you left her*
I like this poem, it's well written. I like the ending the best.
- Angel Of the Storms

I'm not the smartest person in the world, so I kinda don't understand the part about 'high noon's thick night'. This is NOT a flame, I repeat... NOT A FLAME. I'm mearly wondering, isn't noon in the middle of the morning/afternoon? Just curious. I like it though. The stars dotting the sky and all.

i like the content, good words to it, but you gotta work on your form, it kind of changes with each line. otherwise, keep up the good work! and thanks for the review.

I do hope you didn't really see the moon right after bio. M. It's an ok poem, kinda sketchyish, but considering it was done in like what? 15 minutes? it's not terrible. The big balls of light part has me confused a bit (aside from the moon, there isn't any right? right?!). Oh well, not bad- you're starting into rhyming now...