Hey there! ^_^ I just decided to see my stastics and clicked on the good people who placed me on their favorite's list and became very surprised. My point is, thanks for putting me in there. ^_^ I'm flattered really. Anyway, I'll stop yakking about myself and tell you what I think of your little song over there. It's nice. And yes, I found a cute tune to go with it with a little girl's innocent voice singing it quite well. I like it. You just plainly described on how old-fashioned some parents are and on how women can have so many oppurtunities and choices and jobs and blahblahblah. The rhyming's not bad either. Anway, it's 1 sumtin in the morning and I have to go. Ta-ta for now! Keep writing!

Good good! Now you just need to play the music and then you're good to go! I really liked it, and I especially liked the chorus. And the flow was pretty good too. Good job!

when I read the song, it was like I could hear the music in my head! awesome.

o I like it a lot. Good expression and if you can sing it would be a great song..."Mama frowns as SHE throws the peelings away." you have the written down and that is just a small spelling/grammer error...but hey we can't always be perfect when writing.

aww that so beautiful and profound! wowers..rock on!

OMG! thats so cool. I wish i knew the beat i'm sitting here looking really dumb singing it out loud, lol. I think its very well done and being the dork I am I based it on my own life and it inspired me. Thanks for writing it it was really good!

As you said... weird. I like it though

Huh, pretty interesting. Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately, I've been kinda busy! But I'm back now!
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This is good. I like this. Sometimes this is how I feel - not in the way that my parents push me, but the way I feel inside. I have so many tomboyish interests, yet I highly admire the lady-like qualities.