Reviews for The Coffee Shop of Cliches

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Affluentheartache 2007-05-02 ch 1,	abuseSounds good so far, but I thought employees of a casino are not allow to actually gamble where they work. My bf works in a casino and he had to like notify the personnels there if he was to even wanted to eat at their buffet, which he nevers. Just saying, maybe where you're from it's different. I am from sydney. Anyways good works, sounds interesting. Update soon.
aphroditeseyes 2006-08-11 ch 1,	abuseOh. She's a girl? Did I miss something? Did you say that already? Was that supposed to be obvious? She is a girl right? Of course she is. Her name's Bella. Duh. Right, well, what I wanted to say is that this first chapter seems very promising, and that I look forward to reading the whole thing. And to wish you good luck with writing the rest of it. Update soon, please...
Andrea 2006-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseContinue please! I'm liking it very much already
boom 2006-06-13 ch 1, anon.	abusei have to say..the name 'jasper' made me interested in reading this story. (my crush for so many years). I really like where this going..I think you should continue it...even though you haven't updated in 2 years -_-" Well...it's understandable of you getting a writer's block because this is some story you've conjured up. great start. i HOPE you update this =]
minute-glass 2005-11-15 ch 1, anon.	abuselove it so far :D update asap! :)
Ridley Jack 2005-06-28 ch 1,	abuseOoh, sounds good! You should update! I would so love to read (and review) this story! wails Why haven't you updated? Don't you love me? (Never mind the fact that we just met... I'm Ridley, btw) I totally can't wait to see how this turns out! What kind of girl he ends up falling hopelessly for, because he will, I know. This is the romance section; it's bound to happen. The question is, what kind of girl? It's not gonna be his "usual", though there's gonna be one of those in the story, with a name like Darcy, Tracy, or Stacy (sorry if your name is one of those... I actually have a Darci, and she's a druggy, so I guess you can't tell by names :P) Ok, I think I've rambled on and subjected you to enough of my insane delusions, so au revior!
Justice Bana 2005-06-01 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good! Your writing style is unique and easy to read and the story looks like it can really go places. Update soon!
uu 2005-05-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseu need to update this story. You've updated all of your other stories...but this is the most interesting one! I swear this is one of the best prolouges I've ever read, and it makes me so giddy to just go through it for like...the fifth time (since that's all I'm given to read). I also like the pictures you chose for your characters...but in order for this story to make it to the top of all the fictionpress stories, YOU NEED TO POST A SECOND CHAPTER! plz? You said this story was being updated...but nothing's happening. And you probably have a busy life and all, but please...even if it's majorly short...put SOMETHING down! I love this first chapter with all my heart. It inspires me to write my stories.Can you do me a favor...if you read this? Can you email me and let me know on this story's status? You don't have to if you don't have time...I was just wondering. oh well, thanks for the wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work! kne
coca 2005-02-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseplz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz updateyou're taking too long and i've been waiting forever. I read your profile and you've updated your other stories but not this one. plz plz plz plz plz plz update
KNE 2005-02-18 ch 1,	abusewow, well writtenI've been looking for a good story to read and this might be the one. Plz update!
Jessica 2005-01-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really like this. It pulls you in right from the beginning and you're wanting to know more about Jasper and even Bella. Update soon.
Bananalogic 2005-01-18 ch 1,	abuseoh my god, what a wonderful intro. that has to be the BEST discriptive intro i have ever read. luv hannah banana
liv-star 2004-12-05 ch 1,	abuseAww...continue writing! I'm eager to see the story plot line. ^__^
SleepDontWeep 2004-08-04 ch 1,	abusereally unusual! good though! if u get a chance please check out some of mine! :)
Tsuta 2004-05-06 ch 1,	abuseGood start! Please update soon!

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