Reviews for Reasons not to Date

Jeoal
2004-02-04
ch 1,

abuseI really like the concept of this story, and would love to see more of Mikah and Jakhob, if you ever decide to add on to it. ;-) They seem to have a sweet friendship, and it would be interesting to see if/how they get together.
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The only thing I would have to mention about this story that is pseudo-critique-ish is that I wanted more detail. :-) More about the characters, their friendship, their lives, feelings...etc and blah blah blah. But I'm no expert on the subject, so you'd probably be better off not listening to me, anyway. ;-)
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Anyhoo, please keep writing! I'd love to read more of your stories.
-Jeoal

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