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Melissa Norvell
2006-05-23
ch 16,
abuseThis is a beautifully written piece. I was so involved that I was reading this piece for hours and couldn't get away from it. It's nice to see a great story such as this being written. You don't find many good ones now-a-days. Maybe you could come and read some of my works. I'd be honored if you would R & R my stories.
Advent of Apocalypse
2005-04-23
ch 4,
abuseThis chapter was so cute, especially the ending.
Gaki
2004-06-19
ch 16, anon.
abuseLMAO! Those were some of the funniest add-ons I've ever read! I love this story but...who draws the pics? Umm...maybe if I ever get e mail I can send you how I pictured them...(I am a VERY accomplished artist for a thirteen year old) ^-^ But I still love them! They sound almost exactly like Birdie and Thad, If you ever even get this go to freewebs.com/sdcrew13/ ok? The story as far as I've written it is on there. Bird and Thad are just a side story, but I'm planning on making one of their one. *^-^* I love Birdie and Thad! Hmm...*Thinks hard* I think this would be how it goes: Morgan=Birdie and Zak=Thad...I think, I never really got which rold they played but they act like each other... oh well...
lethalpaine
2004-05-23
ch 16,
abuseThe last scene was my favorite, had to be.
"You can't tell it was me!" is just classic. And as for them... *points to orgy/pop corn fight* Um... I hope they have fun. ^^'
And I wonder how they keep up the popcorn fight too... *ponders*
lethalpaine
2004-05-23
ch 15,
abuseIt's about damn time I review this thing. ^^'
*glompies Theo to near death* omg! i never knew!! i'm so sorry! i swear that i'll never try to peep on you and joey ever again! er... uh... *looks at arm, where a watch usually is* lookathetimeigottagobye!
*zooms off*
Artemis1000
2004-05-13
ch 16,
abuseAw, I can't wait for the sequel to begin! And I loved the deleted scenes, the one with Daemon's family was so adorable!
Purged Account
2004-05-10
ch 15,
abuseYeesh, I see what you mean about all that Theo-angst. My god, that poor poor man. I swear, if you don't give him puppies, cake, and all things happy til the day he dies, then I shall... well... y'know, do something evil. ^__^ (yes, I suck at threats). Nice chappie!
Purged Account
2004-05-10
ch 14,
abuseWAH! That was so sad for Morgan. The bit where the kid sees him and runs away... man, poor Morgy! It'd be horrible to live a life like that -- stupid prejudices. >_
Artemis1000
2004-05-09
ch 15,
abuseAw, I love this chapter!
It was so sad when Theo lost his girlfriend, but it was very touching, too.
Kazzy/Squee
2004-05-06
ch 15, anon.
abuseYay Theo back story! *does the happy chicken dance of victory*
Blu Evermind
2004-05-05
ch 15, anon.
abuseWOW! That first-person account was beautiful...*cries dramatically* OH did I say that my little brother is named Joseph? I'm gonna call him Joey from now on. *cries some more from dramatic first-person account*
squee
2004-04-27
ch 14, anon.
abuseHi, Schu! *waves happily* just finished reading all these chapters...tres bien! or something...how do you manage to keep up the humor? ah, not speaky right... d'oh. well, talk to you on the lj I guess. *thumbs up to you*
lethalpaine
2004-04-23
ch 14,
abuse*dies of sheer cute/happy/sad -ness* I loved it! If only little Zak could have met "Weird Man"... *sigh* -hey, do either of them remember it now? I should go ask Morgan.
Blu Evermind
2004-04-21
ch 14, anon.
abuseI must be the first one to review for this chapter for I read it like what 15 minutes after you posted it? That's like freaky. I like the Weird Man part. Har! That was funny. Its Weird man! *laughs some more like an idiot* You don't mind If I use that name in one of my comics do you? It won't be pertaining to Morgan of course.
firehazzard
2004-04-17
ch 13,
abuseCute...oh so cute ^^. I really love these little stories on all the characters. I'm glad i get to learn more about them.
Yay! finally Theo and Joey are together!!
Can't wait for the next update!!
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