*wide eyed* more please? i'd like to find out what happens to philippe!~Kara

yay a new chappie! Aww I feel sorry for both Isabel and Phillipe! Maybe even Isabel more because her beliefs are so misguided and it's so sad that she is willing to marry that nasty Heeding for honour and not love. It's also really sad that she used to love Edwin's stories but has now changed. Poor Phillipe too! He's right about his rights - couldn't resist - and I really hope that he can do something about the opression of the slaves. Ooh that factory place doesn't sound too friendly - I hope Phillipe will be ok!

I really respect Edwin too - and agree with his views. I hope that one day his idea of how the slaves can be will come true. I feel sorry for Isabel though, not marrying for love. Great chappy!

WOW! I love the idea, and I love your story! I can't think of anything wrong or mis-done, so I await your next update! ^_^

Aww bless. Isabel is quite nice really, I think, just misguided by her upbringing etc. I like Edwin, he seems to have the right idea, but, as I said before, I rely don't like Heeding lol great work! I will read any updates you have to offer

hehe I like Edwin and Isabel. Can't say I like Heeding though... Anyway it's so sad how they call him an 'it' and treat him like an animal. Bless

Aww bless! So sad! I hope that Isabel takes the attitude that slaves are human beings. I wonder what she'll be like! I don't like Tom, though, I'm glad that he got lashed at hehe.

ooh so it's a bit like survival of the fittest. Poor slaves :( I'm the type who detests any sort of work so I feel really sorry for them. Ooh shapeshifting - I love it - I wish I could do it lol. Hey the dragons seem a pretty nice bunch I think. Yay go Stephan for saving Phillipe, although I feel sorry for Queen Susanna. Oh no poor Stephan :(. Wonder what Phillipe's next owner will be like!

brilliant story! Phillipe reminds me alot of Zidane ^_^

This is a very good story so far! I really want to know what happens next. ^_^ You're a great writer.

Good chapter. Things are happening and his weakness when it comes to water makes a lot of sense!

This is really good!! (but what was i expecting after your other story!?) anyway really well written, very descriptive and paced!! I really like it. ^_^
~Tamarisk~

Still good. In fact, it's getting better. Your writing seems to be coming easier, it seems less stiff.

Another good chapter, a bit less confusing. There were still some spelling mistakes, they seemed to be the result of typing too fast, and occasionally it seemed like a word was missing in a sentence. If you read over your work, you'll be able to catch things like that. Also, sometimes the names seem a little modern. . .it might be just me, so I wouldn't worry about it. You've set up the story well, hopefully the real plot will begin soon.

OMG! That was BRILLIANT!
You're a really skilled writer!
Update soon?
~Toki~