*blinks*. Your vocabulary in this poem is incredible and I love the images and irony but this poem is crying to enjambment. As it is the flow is rather jolty due to the long, Latinic words and Word's autoformating (capitalisation problems _

wow, very good. (yeah, I always thought pax romana didn't really sound right... _)
you have a crazy way with words, I'll say it again. You must have no trouble in english _ (ugh my english teacher hates iambic pentameter, thus I do really bad during the poetry section T_T) lol. you have some really active muse going for you. (lol!)
ja ne!
pont

from what i see, in comparison to you, i merit no compliment. your wordplay and diction are excellent, though the level of it seems over the top at some points. I'm sure you know what I mean,and have undoubtedly heard it, or thought of it, so disregard if you've

Your work immerses me. You just pull me in and don't let go. Stunning.

This was neat! Brilliant job.
Lidless Eye