Your vocabulary lends brilliantly to your already impeccable poetry. It's just amazing.

the words used in this aree pretty difficult waut that was not my review i like this poem and the way you write each and every word is wonderfull

IM SO SORRY!
I don't think I've gotten the time to review you yet, and I was checking my reviewers files today and I noticed I had missed a couple people! I'm so sorry it took me so long to find this problem! *rambles on and on*
anywho, is is great, I'm a gemini! ^__^ very well worded, a LITTLE confusing as to what you're reffering to, but overall very 'mythological'.
keep up the great work!
~pont

Once again, I LOVE the imagery in this. You are probably the best at expressing angst with it. Great job on this, and keep it up.
~Lidless Eye

sounds like it would be an interesting series..
though i may be biased as a gemini...