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Wicked
2008-05-14
ch 1, anon.
abuse"Just one last kiss. One more to taste." Honestly, I love that line. I have stolen it to use as my MSN message.

the verbage is slightly raw, you can tell this was an earlier work. But all in all. I like. :-)
Bloody Dewfall
2006-06-22
ch 1,
abuseGreat rhytm, and the twist is absolutely amazing!
Anakin/Obi-wan
2005-11-08
ch 1,
abuseHey, It's me dark kakashi. I really like this poem. It rocks.
Seeing Starz
2004-01-22
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was great...write more.
*Seeing Starz*
Amethyst Horizon
2004-01-22
ch 1,
abusewow! you have incredible talent! i love your poem! i like how the beginning is kind of like "Romeo and Juilette" and then you change it into your own story! well done and beautifully written!!
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