Kicks Arse! *cowers behind door* Watch out for Darren, he might bite... ;p

oh... lovely. a refreshing vocabulary, and perfect rythmn.

ouch... written well... not about me I hope... REALLy hope. But, something about it was really good... I'm not sure what.
Love, Raye

the 'and' that starts a line can be removed and the poem sounds better, at least in my opinion. Nicely written other than that.