Great poem, it's definately got a good and steady beat, except I'd revise or take out the 5th verse. I think it unbalances it.
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Very nicely put. I liked the last stanza a lot :)

A very nice and uplifting poem. I so often forget to think about simple and beautiful things like this. This poem was a wonderful reminder. Keep up the good work!

Wow, beautiful. Well balanced and very well written. The rythmn really adds to the feel of the poem.