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| ByFireAndMoonlight 2004-07-23 ch 1,  | abuseHm nice. Never fear the darkness, Admit that it's there, and then you can see the light better. |
| Hero Hydro 2004-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI can really relate to this, it really is beautiful. You're very talented, keep up all the excellent work. |
| Mystik Reflections 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abuseWOW THAT WAS ONE OF A KIND IT WAS REALLY GOOD :) AND THANKS FOR REVIEWING MY POEM |
| Nighttime Wanderer 2004-06-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is another really good poem. And another one that I can greetly relate to. I could sit here and say everything that I said for Compassion Killing, becaus eit all aplies, but I won't. Because you have heard it all before. Good job! ^_^ |
| Tameron Millicent 2004-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is so...perfectly put together, it all falls into place. I love it. |
| Teacup Majoram 2004-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAh. Yea...I wrote this in like...one minute? So...Yea...*runs off to revise* |
| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2004-01-22 ch 1, | abuse_-OO_- Love it. Know the feeling, I felt the same way when I left the Catholic Church and my mother and I were fighting. . .I'm a sucker for the word "Mommy" in anything. :) -Jessica |
| Crelian2202 2004-01-22 ch 1, | abusetry to change 'but' where it starts a line. It is a really weak starter and can simply be deleted sometimes. Other than the occrances of that nicely done. |